Writing believable stories…

Someone asked me a question the other day, I won’t type it out word for word because it was quite long, but the gist of it was:

“I want to write a cuckold story, how do I make it convincing. How do I start with a ‘normal’ possibly even slightly prudish wife, and end up with a ‘hotwife’ who’s willing to take black lovers and let them use her in ways she wouldn’t let her husband (anal, swallowing etc).”

There was a lot more to it than that, but that’s the main thrust of it anyway.

I’m flattered to be asked, of course, but whether I’m the right person to ask I don’t know. I haven’t actually written a huge amount of cuckold stories, but I do enjoy reading them sometimes. My problem is, I’m a stickler for realism. To my mind, the scenario above isn’t the basis for a story, it’s the outline for a novel (or at least a novella).
For reasons I won’t go into, the question was asked from the viewpoint that the husband wants his ‘prudish’ wife to cuckold him. So in the first instance you have to plant the seed, and this obviously needs to be done very gradually and delicately, seeing as if she really is as repressed as suggested she will just shut down the idea straight away. I guess there’s a number of ways this can be done, the husband could start off telling her he loves watching his cock disappear inside her, then subtly shift this to he loves watching her pussy being filled with ‘cock’ (leaving out ‘my’) and eventually start working in the idea of telling her how much he’d loved to see her filled with another man’s cock.
So then the choices are to condense this into a couple of paragraphs and hope the readers make the jump, which they probably will, most people seem to be quite willing to accept massive changes in character overnight as long as it advances the story to the ‘good bits’.
Of course, not everyone wants to write 50,000 or 100,000 words, not everyone has the time or inclination and so compromises have to be made. One of the best cuckolding stories I have ever read is posted on Literotica by the author Tony88888, it’s called ‘Discovering My Nasty Wife’ and it cleverly negotiates difficult jumps in the story through various devices, for instance the ‘wife’ attends a party with her friends and things happen there which trigger changes in her mindset. Later in the story she presents her husband with an ultimatum, she will fulfil his fantasy but these are the conditions and if he stops her at any point that’s fine but she will never try again.
The story isn’t short, in fact it’s 15,000* words. But the author builds things nicely, first the wife dates another guy, then she gives him a blowjob, and so on… this gives the story a really good foundation and makes it far more believable than if the first night she went out with him she’d come back with her pussy and her ass dripping with cum…
As my e-mailer asked so eloquently put it: In real life, if a woman sleeps with a colleague or a guy she meets on a drunken night out, that’s plain cheating. If the husband finds out, he calls his lawyer or he gets his shotgun lol. He doesn’t say “Oh, no problem honey. Bring him around next weekend, I’ll make you both a nice dinner and then I’ll lick his spunk out of your fanny”.

You can read ‘Discovering my Nasty Wife’ by clicking HERE. I think it’s a terrible shame that Tony88888 hasn’t written many more stories as he is clearly very talented.

*My original guess of 3-4,000 proved to be woefully inaccurate as a commenter pointed out!

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